Do you agree or disagree?
It is better to work for business owned by someone else than to work the business of one’s own family
Nowadays, due to the competing environment of job opportunities, it has become really hard to find an occupation that meets your interests, goals, and dreams. In my humble opinion, if you are a member of a family that has their own business, you must not miss the chance to take the job and improve your skills. Actually, I have some specific reasons for this opinion which will be covered in the following paragraphs.
First of all, as mentioned in the beginning, the business environment out there is really competitive and if you want a position, you have to work hard to get it. Actually, if you simply check out the career requirements, you can see that they all want an educated person who has some years of experience at a great company. Hence, getting the position might not be as easy as it should be.
Additionally, as mentioned in the previous paragraph, to get a job, you need experience. Well, honestly speaking, almost all the big brands and agencies out there prefer to employ someone knowledgeable, skillful, and also creative who has already proved that can be a great employee and manage tasks in an intriguing way. Therefore, if you are looking for a career, especially as a newbie, a family business is the best for you. Doing so, at least you have the opportunity to start a career, learn new skills, and work for some years to prove that you are capable of being a good worker.
Finally, yet importantly, having someone to help you in your career is an essential part of being successful in your job. In fact, when you choose to be a part of your family business, you have the chance to get help from your family members. Definitely, your family members are people who have been supporting you all your life, and hence, asking them for a hand can be way easier than asking someone you have just met. Moreover, in the work environment, people have to trust each other and this is what you already have with your family members. Hence, you can expect to achieve your goals in a shorter period. Furthermore, the existing trust avoids harsh situations such as unfair criticism, misunderstandings, and other disadvantageous circumstances.
In a nutshell, in my point of view, working for a business of one’s own family is better than working for others because people can get a career in a short time, it doesn’t need to be experienced in the job to start, and also known employers trust you more than others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, furthermore, hence, honestly, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, at least, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70725995316 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78180711452 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496487119438 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3343655082 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.235294118 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1176470588 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280905423078 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950325622221 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967420971405 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184542602386 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101849786073 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.