Do you agree or disagree? It is easier for parents to raise children than it was 50 years ago.
There is no doubt that nearly all of us will amke a family in our life span, and having kids is one of the inevitably results of this behavior. Raising a child in this sophisticated world where we live is a matter of debate in general. While many people believe that nurture a baby and raising a child is easier now than past, some others, like me, think that it has more difficulties nowadays rather than past. I aptly substantiate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, nowadays parents' expectiation of their children and their willing are ellevated. I mean because of the advancment in technology and increasing access to information through this technology flow, people want the best of everything for their kids. Folks are trying to prepare all demanding conditions such as equipments and services for children to guarantee their success in future. As an example, I can recall when I was a sixteen-year youngman my mother bought the first home-computer for me, although I could not work with that very well. My father suffered to pay some part of that cost. In the past incontrast, children did not want expensive dolls or other equipment, and parents easily could afford shildren's needs. These new demands put many financial burden on parents, which were not in the 50 years ago.
Secondly, growing of population and limited resources and services have made a competition for adults who want raise a child nowadays. Parents should work around the clock to earn money to afford all of children needs. Beside that because of the braodcasting the news and informatin and access of children to them, parents worry how control them not to reach the improper information. Nowadays, all children have their small gadgets such as smart-phone, smarth-watch, laptop and computers. Parents should be carefull because children have access to enormous data which of course many of them are not suitable for them. To put this in perspective, last years my brother said that his young girls was playing game in her laptop and suddenly some harmfull advertisemnet pop up in the screen. She has become anxious after that she see some dangeours scene in that advertisment. These high-tech improvments have some bane inaddition boons for parents, which made parents worry about the raising children in the new information era.
In sum, I strongly believe that parents have more difficulties now rather than decades ago to raise a child properly. This is because there is more advanced technology which brings more risk for children and because people want to prepare all the best for children and many of adults face big problems in this way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
...for children to guarantee their success in future. As an example, I can recall when I was...
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Suggestion:
..., which were not in the 50 years ago. Secondly, growing of population and limi...
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... children in the new information era. In sum, I strongly believe that parents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, i mean, in general, no doubt, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97072072072 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70551936562 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529279279279 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1447688098 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.095238095 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259874720059 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069898234366 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457449365131 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154783391383 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375909902522 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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