Do you agree or disagree: It is impossible to always be completely honest with you friends?
It is undoubtedly said that keeping honesty between with friends is a great traditional lofty virtue in our life. Some people insist that they always be completely honest with friends benefit to maintain the friendship, which brings a considerable quality to their life as well as mutual loyal. However, there are some other or even important factors to ensure one’s significance. Thus, from a personal perspective, how crucial they could adapt themselves to the honest boundaries, which is actually adaptive. The reasons are discussed below.
To begin with, it is undoubtedly said that keeping some private spaces benefit to work in the offices. Taking my friend’s experiences for a stance, she had worked in the design company as team leader with high salary, which is different with other work friends. Due to she had some conversations to talk with a good work friend with the salary system of company. When her work friend knew her salary that was very different with her, her face changed so fast and interrupted that conversation with my friend. Even worse, the girl did not talk and cooperate to my friend any more with unfair feeling, of which the girl had changed to other a team leader to work. Thus, it is obvious that people cannot be entirely honest to friend.
Additionally, keeping some private spaces that people can maintain friendship without entirely honesty. Taking my father as an example, my father have been getting along well with his friend over forty years without completely honest. They have been working in the dissenting public institution of nation, and they do not know the salary system of each other or office’s policies and so on. But, all of that does not influence their friendship not at all, in contrast to that they can maintain very well the friendship between of them with some a little bit of private space on the professional ethics, and they have been supporting each other, rather than completely and entirely honest with friends to break some professional rules to earn the fellowship. Therefore, giving a little bit of private space to friend is much better than entirely honest.
Finally, keeping some private spaces can help to protect themselves. It is undoubtedly said that having no people is fully tell to their friend everything with absolutely honest. For an instance, the password of bank car and property ownership certificate that people need to keep the secretive. If they entirely tell their friends, who can take the responsible for nothing happen that? Meanwhile, a lot of news we saw that, people cannot reveal the some secretes in their important matters with friends, otherwise, they may get the troubles, even go possibly astray. On the contrary, if people keep some necessary secrets that can protect themselves, why not?
In the nutshell, for the reasons that we can safely conclude that keeping some private space too important a factor to entirely honest with friends, and it is obvious that people do not influence friendship between friends with some necessary factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
... our life. Some people insist that they always be completely honest with friends benefit ...
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Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... friendship between of them with some a little bit of private space on the professional et...
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Line 5, column 779, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...arn the fellowship. Therefore, giving a little bit of private space to friend is much bett...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
...dly said that having no people is fully tell to their friend everything with absolut...
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Line 7, column 452, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...s we saw that, people cannot reveal the some secretes in their important matters wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06336633663 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62414269614 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467326732673 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.389733502 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.173913043 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9565217391 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196623086075 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661117544376 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599338284995 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127895937783 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414684873984 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.