Some might think that owing to the fast-paced, competitive world, people are absorbed in their lives and do not care about other people. There are lots of opinions regarding this topic, but I believe that more and more people are willing to help others. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the rise in citizenship has brought people to be more active in helping others. What I mean is that people are aware that other people's private life is as important as their own lives. Back then people did not care what is happening to other people. They thought people should solve the problem by themselves. However, It is different now. For instance, a few decades ago, there was not enough knowledge about how to care for students who got bullied. However, when I was In high school, one of my friends Katy got bullied. Nonetheless, she was able to recover and graduate with high grades. All this was possible because students and teachers now know how to deal with it. They all came out to help her. Even some students who were not friends with her knew what they had to do. This clearly demonstrates that due to the growth in citizenship, many people are more likely to help others.
On top of that, people know that helping others can reduce crime. Some might say that as the crime rate is rising, they are doubtful if people really need help or not and hesitate to help. Nonetheless, according to a study, I read online, the possibility that one might get into trouble has decreased. In fact, when people gave staples to others who need help, the possibility of them stealing others' money has decreased. This shows why people are more willing to help others.
At first glance, it might seem like people are weighing their personal lives more. However, based on the idea of citizenship and crime rate, one can logically conclude that more people are willing to support other people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, really, regarding, so, then, even so, for instance, i feel, i mean, in fact, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65889212828 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32798423063 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533527696793 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5680719836 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6363636364 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320231894638 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105625836722 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853792973667 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225092061192 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321207592167 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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