Do you agree or disagree? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every question or topic requires careful deliberation in that there are always multiple variables to a truth. In my humble opinion, I strongly disagree that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict for the following reason.
The first and exquisite reason that makes me hold this belief is that even though country decided to follow strict rules, there are plenty of crime, violence and terrorism are held in this day and age. For instance, in my country has powerful law and penalty is extremely high. However, five children died due to the accident on the average.
Another reason deserving some words here is we are living an open democratic society. Therefore, at least rules have to be strict so that people will not do everything they want such as disruption of rights of others and we can make a piece. To illustrate more thoroughly, my brother was fond of insulting people without hesitation. Hence, we are constantly quarrel with each other. One day my mother set up a family law such as no more briol, respecting and lend in a ear to each other. After that, our bond became more strong and my family started to live peacefully.
Finally yet importantly, if there was not rigorous guideline, people began to do something illegal. For instance, Mongolia has deficient drug law system, so that there are large number of people handling weed without any shadows of doubt.
In a nutshell, obey has to be strict so that we can create peace environment and live happily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'quarreled', 'quarrelled'.
Suggestion: quarreled; quarrelled
...ut hesitation. Hence, we are constantly quarrel with each other. One day my mother set ...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s no more briol, respecting and lend in a ear to each other. After that, our bond...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... my family started to live peacefully. Finally yet importantly, if there was not rigor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, after all, as to, at least, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52581440463 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61724137931 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6840858111 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192968630903 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571786257315 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111696693624 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102392677707 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881440140435 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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