Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Although, life today is better than it used to be, human behavior causing problems that will mean life in the future is less comfortable. Use specific reasons and examples to support your point of view.
As the human’s intelligence has progressed throughout the period, it has brought up so many improvements to this world in various spheres like transportation, education, and so on. According to that our lives, today, are much more comfortable and convenient than in the past. On the contrary, sometimes, we as human also causing some problems which make our world become less lively in the future. I strongly agree with this point for some reasons which will be elucidated in this essay.
First of all, Due to the industrial revolution in England, It accelerates the growth of this world. As the advent of technological age and civilization, The majority of countries have gradually increased the number of factory and industry in their countries and these industries, finally, have become a steer that makes the world move rapidly. However, With too fast development in the industrial side, causing various serious problems related to the environment. Because many green areas in this world have been exploited and disappeared by our hands. As a result, the trees in the future are getting fewer than before. Finally, it will intensify the damage of the problems such as global warming and constant natural disasters which are threatening us now.
Secondly, Not does human only harm our environment, we also pose a threat to animal living. In fact, the number of many species in today are gradually plummeting and the worst is extinction by various factors like a natural disaster, global warming, especially hands of a human. Nowadays there are some people who not paying attention to protecting the environment and inclining to destroy many natural resources including animals in several ways like throwing garbage on the shore of the sea or even in the forests which mostly are a tourist attraction. All of these actions have great to these animals which have no voice to call for their rights to fight back. It is necessary that everyone take this issue into many considerations that we should encourage others to see the importance of the presence of these animals in our society.
In summary, When time flies, human’s behavior has changed by changing of the time as well. Not everyone is all perfect. Anyways, I still believe that although we are living in the most comfortable age which caters almost everything for us, however, if we ignore the issues are happening now, as a result, these problems will worsen our world that we don’t want to dwell in anymore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05339805825 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79725822834 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54854368932 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9058898516 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133374782752 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453434858948 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485054117228 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087620970852 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578546044634 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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