do you agree or disagree?it is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than by doing exercise.
Without any shadow of doubt, a hectic life is omnipresent phenomena, and the way people getting relaxed plays a prominent role in every individual’s lives. Although some people might adhere to the idea that it is better to relax by reading a book or watching a movie, others possess the conviction that doing physical activities is a more suitable call. As far as I am concerned, watching movies and reading books is a pragmatic approach to get rid of daily life stress. I will elaborate on my reasons through the following paragraphs.
To start with, one should take into account that one way to find mental peace is to be distracted. The reason for this is that movies and books are one of the best means to make one’s mind distracted, because they consist of a myriad different subjects. different genres could be amusing and after watching them, people feel fresh and somehow happy. To make it more clear, consider you had a bad day at work: your boss was upset with you because there was a failure in the project, you had a huge fight with your colleague, and you missed the bus getting home. you arrive home and turn on the tv and a comedy movie is playing, and you sit down and watch it. it is nt far from the imagination that after successive laughs you will feel better, because your mind was distracted for a while. it helps you to put things into a perspective, and relax for some time. A relevant study in Norway argues that people who watch tv series as a recreational activity, have 31% specific hormone of feel relaxed in their blood. this could account for the effect of watching movies and their impact on relaxation.
Another key thing I would like to mention is that films and books could be quite educational. it is a commonly held belief that our brain is very capable of learning, and every data we let in our mind has an effect. so, by choosing the books and movies with educational context, people could make a good of the free time they spend to get relaxed. take a personal experience as an example: back to the time I was a teenager I had a hard time during school, thus I used to read science-fiction novels after school trying to forget about it. The reading helped me to learn many new things and get excited, the tiredness was gone and I felt so fresh to resume my daily activities. Had I did not read those books, I would not have been able to learn so many things, and to choose the major I was interested in.
To bring everything into conclusion, I am of the view that watching films and reading books are desirable choices to relax, due to the fact that they are distractive and educational. it is recommended that people who want to get relaxed by movies and books not only should consider an interesting subject for the movie, but should be careful about the quality of the context. What can be better than learning and relaxing at the same time?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2377.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51901140684 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54894759295 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509505703422 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1502178425 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.045454545 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77272727273 5.45110844103 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274845924917 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753865922117 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622494130773 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170024430799 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633918964363 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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