Parents have lots of experiences about life more than children also, they watching their children’s life to how grow up with what problems. On the other hand, biological people inherited same personality characters, such similar mistakes. In another word, Parents are the best teachers to show us to how face on problems to solve with sharing their experiences. But in my opinion, parents just know about life on their sight.
Firstly, nowadays, with advancement of technology and science, in all modernity life’s, all people can share their experiences together and it’s not matter how much they have distance they can see each other on screen of their smart phone’s. sometimes knowledge of children is more than parents about some objects. For example, our age gap between my mother and I is, 40 years. Therefore, her knowledge about using internet is week and most of the time I should teach her. Just yesterday, she wants to send Email and she couldn’t know how it’s work, so she asked me, and I explained for her on phone, but also she couldn’t follow my words and got confused second by second. To that end, she waits for me to come back home after a day to do it.
What’s more, because of social medias, people needn’t to hear parent’s advice's about all topics they should just search it on Google [ it’s a website that all the people in the world can access on the internet and use it to search about million subjects]. Furthermore, parents and grandparents couldn’t impose on their superstitions and traditional ideas to children because in 21 century no one accept that stuffs. For example, my father always told me when I was kid, to avoid to touch black cats because they are evil. But I just read somewhere black cats are more intelligent than other ones.
Above all, not only parents are good teachers but also, when somebody know about something it’s good idea to share it to other to learn it. The best way to share these things is, social medias to connect wide of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... just know about life on their sight. Firstly, nowadays, with advancement of t...
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...itional ideas to children because in 21 century no one accept that stuffs. For example,...
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...al medias to connect wide of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93123209169 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73872456536 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2457250979 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5625 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762210994865 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327400691222 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334502991985 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057672946024 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262283242872 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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