Nowadays, the first thing that scientists think about is, how possible is it, to send human to mars, and actually they did it, in near decades before also, it has some problem that advancement of technology has solved that.
the lecture and reading passage are about,First, how go around trip and back safely with basic humans need for being alive like as food, water, and oxygen, so, the hydroponic solve it, to be able to food space and realize oxygen in space craft.
Second, in space the first thing that, they are faced on is, zero gravity and it makes some problems for human such as, decreased muscle and lower bones density and the solution is the astronomer learn some things to how controlled it and take some vitamins and calcium pills to tolerate it.
Third, they afraid of radiation in the air, but it doesn’t be too much to affected on human, but also they have safe place to be there until radiation gone.
Finally, they shouldn’t be afraid of anything because the scientists think about all the sides of space craft.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: I_AFRAID
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
...calcium pills to tolerate it. Third, they afraid of radiation in the air, but it doesn&a...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, second, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 177.0 270.72406181 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73446327684 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30343632207 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 419.366225166 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 21.2450331126 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2405266688 49.2860985944 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.6 110.228320801 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 21.698381199 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06452816374 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.3589403974 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.498013245 152% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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