do you agree or disagree?
politicians should have strong social skills in order to become successful?
At the turn of the new century, with the development of human’s modern society, politicians have a pivotal role in blooming and thriving of each society. Actually, a successful politicians and leaders should have specific characteristics, one of which is having strong social skills. Although some people adhere to this belief that social skills are by far the most important factor for the prosperity of politicians, I believe being honest and being knowledgeable are the two most significant features that a politician man should have.
The first aspect to point out is that what feature leads to politicians’ success is being knowledgeable. In fact, at the 20th and 21st centuries, with the galloping rate of science and technology, everyone should have wide knowledge in his job to make headway and politicians are no exception. Indeed, a political leader should dedicate his time and life to broaden his perspective in various fields such as health system, educational system, laws, how he can improve them and what changes he should make in his country. Undoubtedly, a political leader should enrich his information, update his knowledge and keep abreast of the world’s events. Not only can he make immediate and rational decisions in critical circumstances, but also he can seize opportunities which are provided for his government. Moreover, he should monitor other successful politician’s strategies and analyze them based on his knowledge; then he can determine far objectives for his country in order provide bright future for youth. Also, According to recent research conducted in my country, more than 80 percent of successful politicians graduated from prestigious universities in the world. Therefore, successful politician need to have professional knowledge.
Another subtle point is that politicians’ honesty can help them to be successful. Indeed, one of the most important factors to attract people’s attention in political issues is honesty. Without doubt, lie poses a threat to politician’s trust. If a politician either tell lie to people about his plans or exaggerate his abilities, it will leave adverse effects on people’s minds so rarely does anyone can confide in his promises in future. To illustrate more, take a case of a politician who concealed truths about financial corruption in government and his lies were revealed in long run for instance; without any shadow of doubt, people lose their confidence to him. Although they try to forgive his fault, they can never believe him or choose him as a leader of their country. In contrast, an honest politician can acquire people’s support and he knows if he runs into a huge problem, people will encourage him until when he solve the problem; hence, politicians’ honesty is a key factor in his prosperity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...does anyone can confide in his promises in future. To illustrate more, take a case of a p...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'solves'.
Suggestion: solves
...people will encourage him until when he solve the problem; hence, politicians' h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.12969924812 0.158761421928 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0883458646617 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0375939849624 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0733082706767 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109022556391 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0225563909774 0.0351676179071 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23795695767 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00187969924812 0.00188951952338 99% => OK
Determiners: 0.0601503759398 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.031954887218 0.0209618222197 152% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0131578947368 0.0139019557991 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2848.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 446.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.38565022422 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.423766816143 0.338922669872 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311659192825 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.226457399103 0.174417080927 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174887892377 0.112833075102 155% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23795695767 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578475336323 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 70.9945246154 59.2087087015 120% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7777777778 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6799333482 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.222222222 120.699889404 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.644075263715 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 55.9436970603 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.5859375 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226718762622 0.300154397459 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126303084603 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0583516906209 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471435945785 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139423941802 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954271296516 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563975269865 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373961128534 0.336927656856 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.058294162829 0.067059652881 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1698171669 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261695700367 0.0618886996521 42% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.