do you agree or disagree?
politicians should have strong social skills in order to become successful?
At the turn of the new century, with the development of human’s modern society, politicians have a pivotal role in blooming and thriving of each society. Actually, a successful politician and leaders should have specific characteristics, one of which is having strong social skills. Although some people adhere to this belief that social skills are by far the most important factor for the prosperity of politicians, I believe being honest and being knowledgeable are the two most significant features that a politician man should have.
The first aspect to point out is that what feature leads to politicians’ success is being knowledgeable. In fact, at the 20th and 21st centuries, with the galloping rate of science and technology, everyone should have wide knowledge in his job to make headway and politicians are no exceptions. Indeed, a political leader should dedicate his time and life to broaden his perspective in various fields such as health system, educational system, laws, how he can improve them and what changes he should make in his country. Undoubtedly, a political leader should enrich his information, update his knowledge and keep abreast of the world’s events. Not only can he make immediate and rational decisions in critical circumstances, but also he can seize opportunities which are provided for his government. Moreover, he should monitor other successful politician’s strategies and analyze them based on his knowledge; then he can determine far objectives for his country in order provide bright future for youth. Also, According to recent research conducted in my country, more than 80 percent of successful politicians graduated from prestigious universities in the world. Therefore, a successful politician needs to have professional knowledge.
Another subtle point is that politicians’ honesty can help them to be successful. Indeed, one of the most important factors to attract people’s attention in political issues is honesty. Without doubt, lie poses a threat to politician’s trust. If a politician either tell a lie to people about his plans or exaggerate his abilities, it will leave adverse effects on people’s minds so rarely does anyone can confide in his promises in future. To illustrate more, take a case of a politician who concealed truths about financial corruption in government and his lies were revealed in a long run for instance; without any shadow of doubt, people lose their confidence to him. Although they try to forgive his fault, they can never believe him or choose him as a leader of their country. In contrast, an honest politician can acquire people’s support and he knows if he runs into a huge problem, people will encourage him until when he solves the problem; hence, politicians’ honesty is a key factor in his prosperity.
On the whole, according to the above-mentioned points and details, it is crystal-clear (obvious) that a successful politician should be a knowledgeable and trustworthy person. It is high time we stopped overlooking the fact that a politician who has strong social abilities can be prosperous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...does anyone can confide in his promises in future. To illustrate more, take a case of a p...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'such as', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241438356164 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.131849315068 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.097602739726 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0376712328767 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0719178082192 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104452054795 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0239726027397 0.0351676179071 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.29309921661 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0256849315068 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.00171232876712 0.00188951952338 91% => OK
Determiners: 0.0702054794521 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0325342465753 0.0209618222197 155% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013698630137 0.0139019557991 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3139.0 2387.08602151 131% => OK
No of words: 494.0 408.028673835 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35425101215 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425101214575 0.338922669872 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311740890688 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228744939271 0.174417080927 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.18016194332 0.112833075102 160% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29309921661 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 68.3257525448 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4407654094 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.95 120.699889404 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 55.8740890688 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.53191489362 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221799356752 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124367625758 0.103427244359 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0577993056575 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494805254585 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152470934489 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903944262147 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467983578033 0.0781384742642 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308349268201 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103893894561 0.067059652881 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146539508623 0.210909579961 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384529043637 0.0618886996521 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.