Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout the history, there are a large number of entertainments for children such as comic strip and different kinds of games. Although some people adhere to this belief that game just has pivotal role in children’s life, I strongly believe that games can have profound effects on adult’s life as same as children due to they can shed their tension and also, it helps to keep their brains active.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes adult to play game is releasing their stress. In fact, Human’s life is analogous with a tortuous way in a mountain in quite a few aspects. Actually, adults have a number of financial concerns and incomplete plans in their personal lives. Not only can they raise their self-confidence by passing game’s stages successfully, but also they will mentally get healthier by playing games. Take a case of a man who is in charge of a family of six and run into a huge problem in his life and is overwhelmed by stress for instance. He can take a break from his life’s failures and unwind by playing some action computer games with his children. A cheerful atmosphere during playing makes him more energetic and lively; hence, prospering in games and having endless hours of fun psychologically boost adult’s morale and help them to persevere in what they want to do.
A further more subtle point is that adults can keep their brains young by playing games. Undeniably, people’s minds, in their lifespans, little by little consume as time goes by. In fact, there are unlimited ways to reduce or delay adults’ brain’s depreciation; one of which is getting involved in intellectual games that they force adults to think more and more. To clarify more, consider puzzle games which improve several skills related to brain such as, creativity, memorizing and navigating. According to recent research conducted in my country, psychologists are in the conviction that adults who play games at least every month are less likely to get Alzheimer in elder ages. Therefore, the importance of playing games for adults is equivalent to for children.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'at least', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249406175772 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.147268408551 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0973871733967 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498812351544 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498812351544 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12351543943 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0403800475059 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89814299168 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332541567696 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00237529691211 0.00188951952338 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0451306413302 0.0887237588012 51% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142517814727 0.0209618222197 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190023752969 0.0139019557991 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2131.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 353.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03682719547 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348441926346 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246458923513 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184135977337 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127478753541 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89814299168 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597733711048 0.524397521467 114% => OK
Word variations: 69.7688984493 59.2087087015 118% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5333333333 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9077610381 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.066666667 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.1792256846 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.67307692308 1.45489161554 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239303220078 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0998179274001 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0590808757231 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.465667347531 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142271235961 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988549726721 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609415658169 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389467390513 0.336927656856 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0569725130677 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197273427755 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509019518394 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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