Do you agree or not? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life
Some people prefer to pay attention on events around the world, while other people who are more practical tend to only focus on things correlate with their daily life. In my opinion, it is necessary to be informed of global events and news, which it will be elaborated in the following paragraph.
To start off, we can learn a lot from other’s prior experience about certain incidents when we are dealing with similar situation. In addition, we are able to not only solve, but to prevent similar problems to happened since we have others’ experience drawn before. Take interesting news during this COVID19 pandemic as an example. A famous American basketball player got confirmed with COVID19 right after the day he used his hand to touch a whole roll of microphone during a press conference and claiming confidently that he will not get the virus in front of the camera. As a result, people around the world now will be firmly aware of the seriousness of governments’ pandemic prevention measures and the danger of this virus.
Another example of global event that is more related to people’s life than many others think is the Fukushima nuclear disaster. The radiation leakage due to the earthquake had caused the whole village to leave their home, which they still cannot return to their original place even now. By raising people’s awareness of the potential dangerous of nuclear power plants, voters can have a better on view laws in their own countries that are related to nuclear power.
Finally, in contrast with those who believe that global events cannot be relevant to their daily life, people who are interested about investment in stock market can absolutely benefit from knowing global events and international situation because it directly impacts their success or failure on the investment. For instance, in 2009, it is the awareness of little changes and clues in the stock market that made some investment successfully survived through the financial crisis.
In conclusion, not matter how irrelevant some global events may seem to some people, in this modern global village, where every countries’ activities are actually closely connected together, it is always important to be aware of things happening around the world, because it helps you to make better decisions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, may, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1299734748 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64270864533 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59151193634 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1448184404 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.769230769 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18512259058 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566086470803 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474871988855 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996194383704 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332971473343 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, may, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1299734748 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64270864533 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59151193634 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1448184404 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.769230769 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18512259058 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566086470803 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474871988855 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996194383704 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332971473343 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.