By and large, people are now very busy in their lives. Sometimes, they have to do a lot of things at a same time in order to deal with changes occurring throughout the world. In this regard, there is controversy regarding the efficiency of people's performance. A popular belief in this regard is that since people have to do many different tasks in their life, they do very few things well, whereas the other group of people have a complete opposite point of view. Personally, I agree with the latter. In the following lines, I am going to support this idea through 2 reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that people can do a lot of tasks very well by using the internet. Internet has facilitated the way that people live. In 50 years ago, it was a real challenge for people to do many different tasks at a same time. They usually had problem with time and could not finish their jobs on time, so the had a low efficiency. That being said, today, thanks to the advancements in technology, like the internet, people are able to do many tasks together. Internet has made a better situation for people in their workplace to do their jobs without any problem with the time planning. A good example of this is students. At schools or universities, students usually have to do many research projects, while studying and preparing themselves for their final exams. Without the internet, it would be impossible for them to do all these stuff together. However, by using the internet, students are enabled to access to a wide range of knowledge and can use academic papers in order to do their projects and researches. Also, they can go to academic Web sites and see extra lectures and materials in addition to their textbooks in order to prepare themselves for their exams. Hence, internet has eased people's lives and can help them to do their task with a high efficiency.
The second reason which deserves some words here is that some basic techniques, such as team working, can help people to do a wide variety of tasks very well. This method will increase the people's efficiency in their works. Nowadays, world is changing rapidly and at any moment, something new happens in the globe, so if people want to be successful in their jobs and their lives, it would be essential for them to catch up with these changes. In this regard, they usually have to do many different things in their workplace together which sometimes would be very hard for them. One way that people can overcome this hardship is that they can do their tasks with other people by participating in group activities. Team working guarantees that people will not have a problem with time anymore and they can do their jobs on time. Besides, by working together, people can use other's experiences in their works through interaction in order to solve their problems. Back to the example, students can participate in group studies and do their assignments with other students. In this way, the assignment will be divided toward the members of the group and it would be done faster and better.
To put everything in a nutshell, although people have to do many different things together, they can do them very well owing to the fact that technology advancements, like the internet, help people to do their job better and as a result, they can have a good feedback on their works. Also, by working with other people as a team, the way of doing jobs would change completely and people can finish their tasks on time with a high quality and efficiency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... regard is that since people have to do many different tasks in their life, they do very few t...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...t was a real challenge for people to do many different tasks at a same time. They usually had ...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ery well. This method will increase the peoples efficiency in their works. Nowadays, wo...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...In this regard, they usually have to do many different things in their workplace together whic...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... a nutshell, although people have to do many different things together, they can do them very ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, such as, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 52.1666666667 196% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2909.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 621.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68438003221 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54523820728 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412238325282 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 895.5 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9543780505 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.310344828 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4137931034 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.62068965517 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340041226605 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116916622607 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905938050673 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281255597219 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517114572105 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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