Do you agree or not?Because people are busy doing so many things, they do very few things well.

As the rapid development and advancement of our society, the debate concerning whether working on multiple things can gain an edge over focusing on only one task is becoming more controversial. Some people may argue that doing different things can help borden one's horizon and diversify one's background. However, the disadvanges outweigh its merit in general from my perspective.

Firstly, it is almost beyond argument that multi-tasking requires a huge amount of time in total. Time is so limited and precious, making it impossible to manage our time successfully for different tasks at the same time. For example, when I was in high school, I need to finish five tests in row in one day. There is always not enough time for students to review so much contents we have learnt. On the other hand, I may perform well in several exam while bad in others because I did not pay attention to some subjects. On the other hand, I may attain an average performance on every exam because I did the review for everything but not thoroughly.

Secondly, frustration and stress are likely to occur while trying to do different kinds of work. If one of the tasks did not meet our expectation, we would become anxious considering the huge amout of other things to be finished. Sometimes, I would struggle on finding the sources for my essays for several days and that make me worry about my assignments, especially near the deadline. Affected by this feeling, I would be less efficient in both my essay writing and the assignments afterwards.

Furthermore, doing many things would cause severe distraction. It is believed that professional talents in one field focus on one specific area of study in their whole life. For instance, the professors in universities have their different interests vary from each other and they just conduct research or projects within their interests. However, if they are not so consistent in their research, deep thinking and concusions are different to be drawn as when they change to think about other subjects, some knowledge from the precious one would be forgotten.

Briefly, I believe people would display better performance when focusing on single task considering lack of time, related frustration and stress and distraction as a consequence of multi-tasking.

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Average: 8.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06068601583 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87967617298 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577836411609 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7132630398 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13161211066 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449255659114 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631029249009 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689926332545 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034252991757 0.0645574589148 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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