Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The advancement of society in the past few years gives rise to the wider range of occupation options. Therefore, whether choosing a job with multiple tasks would be more satisfying compared with doing repetitive work has sparkled fierce debate among the society. Though some may argue that focusing on single task would contribute significantly to working efficiency and proficiency, one cannot neglect the dismerits as stated below.
To begin with, majoring in various types of tasks would remarkably increase the experience of the workers. A large quantity of knowledge can be obtained through working on different fields. Taking doing a project as an example, never could one fail to progress during the process but there is no one would repeat doing the same project over and over considering the limited skills one specific project can give. Hence, by trialing on different tasks, a person would have access to more comprehensible and competent skills, contributing to personal development.
Furthermore, there is higher risk of suffering from mental problems such as anxiety and frustration while doing similar tasks. Contrastly, confidence and sense of fulfilment would be experienced while choosing a different way. My previous experience would give a vivid illustration to this point. When I was in high school, I was given heavy homework of the same type of problems everyday in preparation for the coming exam. I felt stressful and bored within one week, even resulting in the decline of academic performance, because of lack of enthusiasm when tackling a problem.
Lastly, it is without argument that people with diverse working experience would come up with creative ideas more often. They are more likely to propose a innovative solution based on previous experience, be promoted and gain appreciation from others.
Insofar as the aforementioned reasons including abundance of experience, less chance of mental illness and development of creativity, I am in favor of the statement that workers would feel more comfortable given opportunities for different tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 381, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...y homework of the same type of problems everyday in preparation for the coming exam. I f...
Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
... often. They are more likely to propose a innovative solution based on previous e...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45230769231 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94798456878 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633846153846 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.790597346 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.133333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184793588513 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515492501685 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318370060377 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898777904534 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237118937445 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.