Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the advanced education progressed during the past few years, this, however, put the role of teacher under reexamination. Although some may argue that teachers are more appreciated in the current age resulted from the increasing amount of emphasis put on education. I strongly opposed to this view as they failed to consider the following aspects.
To begin with, the social status of teachers is not considered to be prestigious nowadays. As the saying goes, when a thing is scarce it is precious. When my parents were children, there is no one who completed a college degree before, making school teachers the most knowledgable person in their life and their authority was established. As a direct consequence of education development, more schools and universities have emerged along with a considerable size of teachers, which makes this profession easier to achieve and therefore less appreciated.
Furthermore, numerous resources are available, enabling self-learning without the present of teachers. For example, Internet is my best friend when I encounter problems in my homework. It can provide me with access to different methods derived by people all over the world with elaborate explanations and suggested related problems as well. Therefore, the demand for teachers have been remarkably decreased as they are no longer the only person to seek for help.
Lastly, the value of a social group sometimes lie in their financial condition. The salaries for teachers are considered to be average compared with various occupations. Students graduate from college would probably pursue lucubrious positions such as engineers, where teachers never top the list these days. The unwillingness of being a teacher with minor salary also contributes to the regression of their prestige.
In summary, teachers are less appreciated and valued nowadays because of the oversupply of teachers, less demanding students and poor salary. The crucial role of teacher should be rehabilitate to ensure the success of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he role of teacher under reexamination. Although some may argue that teachers are more a...
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Line 17, column 181, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rehabilitated'?
Suggestion: rehabilitated
.... The crucial role of teacher should be rehabilitate to ensure the success of the society. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in summary, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48571428571 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98333998403 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4461280391 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146033910378 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413217266268 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307104632639 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775923481008 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297284283695 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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