Do you agree to plan a course for university students: "Speaking in front of public"
Effective speaking in front of the public is a better way to elucidate our general thought. Sometimes, it becomes paramount in the different profession which engaged with the process of public persuasion. however, some people believe that verbal ability may not be that important as a lot profession depend on the action rather than a talk; but, in my vantage point, I strongly aver that graduate people should have strong oral adept as they have to deal with more diverse people to influence by their work and have to present their though without second meaning.
The first exquisite point to be included is that graduate student have to deal with a lot of people at once for discussing important issue. During this, may be a lot of people may involve, so strong oral skill demanding for the better impression. however, if graduate, who are weak in that factor, may suffer much embarrassment on the process. I want to elaborate this subject by giving my personal example. I had to deliver the opinion in public during graduation; unfortunately, I had a weak communication skills with other at once. At that time, I became nervous and most often I ended upon half of things said with gibbering. Facing this situation, become more discomfiting for me. On the other hand, my friend was more adroit in speaking in front of public; by this skills, he influenced alumni of the college as well as other outer people and unknowingly grabs other great opportunity . Thus, people with good oral skills may save from them for social insults and open the door for the great impression in front to the people.
Another reasons is that most of the graduate have to present their thesis in front of the large audience at the end of the academic year. one can realize that how important can be the oral skills for the graduate student. it not only helps to express our skills in public but also may open door for the new opportunity. most of the company demand people, who is good in speaking, as they have to do task of influencing people or leading the team. we know that people with fragile leading voice definitely loose this platform. furthermore, he might lose confidence to do a things.
Lastly, the aforementioned reasons is the one which cross a mind at the first glance, nevertheless, there is by no means that only reasons available. there is a subtle reason, must be comes in mind. graduate student with good oral skills can be person who can run big event by themselves. furthermore, they have not to rely on other for such activities and may step up himself to next level of success. For instance, we can see a graduate student with good skills organize some event independently and influence people for his interest. my friend has just like caliber, he use his plus point to ask fund for the public employee and other donors. In this way, the speaking skills seem surmount to graduate one to keep pace his development.
To sum up, aforementioned reasons presents the beneficial aspects of the good oral skills in graduate, one can soon realize its need for the ambitious student.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2566.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78731343284 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63280599594 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488805970149 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6675206268 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73076923077 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109926826809 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370752395181 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340324366664 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068059257435 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229145821068 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.