Do you prefer to watch movies and shows that were filmed in your own country, or movies and shows that were filmed abroad?
These days, there are many streaming services that offer movies that are filmed domestically, or one can choose a movie that is filmed abroad. There are definitely people who prefer to watch movies that are filmed overseas, because they can learn more about another culture. However, I personally prefer films and TV that were filmed in my own country.
To begin with, I can make a stronger emotional connection with movies and TV shows that are filmed in my country. It’s difficult to feel emotions about people who are thousands of miles away. For example, I recently watched the TV series, “Squid Game.” This show was set in Korea, and all the actors were Korean. Although the show was scary and there were very upsetting moments, I did not feel very emotional because it was thousands of miles across the ocean. In contrast, my husband and I watched “The Sopranos” which was a show set in New Jersey. There were times during this show when I cried and laughed, because the people were American so I understood them much more clearly. Thus, I personally I react more strongly to American series.
What is more, I can follow and understand the content of the movie better if it is in English. When I watch foreign movies, I have to read subtitles, which is annoying. For instance, there is a series called “Tokyo Vice” that is set in Japan. This is a show about gang violence in Japan. I started to watch it, but eventually I became frustrated with the subtitles and I changed the channel to an American show called “New York Vice Squad.” Although the plots were very similar, I enjoyed the American version much better because I could follow all the events, as the characters were speaking in English. Since I do not like reading subtitles, I prefer to watch shows that are set in the United States.
In conclusion, I personally prefer to watch films and movies that are set within my country. This is because not only do I feel more connected to the characters, but also because I do not have to bother reading subtitles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...difficult to feel emotions about people who are thousands of miles away. For example, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71309192201 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51648146882 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467966573816 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9061874346 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413981352809 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126877929955 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915447395769 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264273419657 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086708740595 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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