Having a job in which you work with other people is better than having a job in which you work alone

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Having a job in which you work with other people is better than having a job in which you work alone.

Nowadays, job decisions have been a controversial topic.Although having a job where you have to work independently may be helpful,actually a job where I have to collaborate with several pioneers is what I consider the most important.My decision is based on the following reasons, which I will develop in my body paragraphs.

To begin with, when I work in a group, I tend to be more productive.To explain broadly, tasks can be shared among the group members and as a result, we all tend to finish our task in a short period..In fact, it is undeniable that as a team we all know each member’s strengths and weaknesses, hence we can always provide a profound solutions to any difficulty experience by the group members.Moreover, teamwork provide substantial opportunity towards bringing ideas and thoughts.Consequently, the higher the ideas put together, the more it is being conceived, and the better the result.For example, during my internship at the Lagos state ministry of health, I was able to work effectively because we were a team of twenty five interns and as a result daily tasks are being shared among the members of the group and with this, each member of the group tend to finish up their work in limited time.Besides, when any member of the group come up with problems we ensure we fix it such that the company won’t be affected.

What is more, working in a group makes one economical .To be more specific, in a situation where a project needs to be executed, all members of the group will contribute money to get the task done and as a result, none of the group members get overwhelmed.Besides, if the project also present risk , all the group members we bare it.In contrast, working independent simply means that you have to execute plan and bare risk alone, which might be expensive.coming from my previous example, while I was interning at lagos state ministry of health,one of the group members broke a liebig condenser and we all contributed ou little quota to get it fixed.

In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe group work remains advantageous because it increases my productivity, and also help me spend less.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in contrast, in fact, as a result, to begin with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89071038251 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20684948405 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521857923497 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 20.1344086022 452% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 335.317014182 48.9658058833 685% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 447.5 100.406767564 446% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.5 20.6045352989 444% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.0 5.45110844103 715% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199482888972 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149432679991 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137318400055 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149432679991 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137318400055 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.4 11.7677419355 403% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.43 58.1214874552 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 10.1575268817 370% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.73 8.01818996416 146% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 10.0537634409 382% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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