Do you prefer watching TV programmes for knowledge or just for entertainment?
Do you prefer watching TV programs for knowledge or just for entertainment?
There is no denying to the fact that television has played a pivotal role in people's lives, and without any doubt, people have diverse purpose when they want to watch TV. The controversial question which arises here is whether people watch television for increasing their knowledge or for entertainment. I personally content that in today's world, because of the people's circumstances, people watch television in their free times for entertainment rather that for attaining knowledge. In what follow, two elaborate reasons will vindicate my standpoints.
The first reason is that in such a sophisticated world where we are living, there are various sources available for every person, and people can utilize these resources for increasing their knowledge. For example, people can easily access to different subjects and matters just by surfing on the Internet, they can type the keywords in the Internet and read diverse subject in the internet. Moreover, there are various devices which people can access to the Internet wherever they are or whenever they want such as tablets, smartphones and notepads. As a result, educational aspects of watching television has been increase over time due to the fact that there is a profuse amount of ways that people can increase their knowledge.
The second reason is that in today's world, people have more obligations and tasks, so they are busier in comparison with past time. After a busy day, they prefer to lie down in front of TV and watch TV for entertainments because their mind are tired, and they prefer to take a rest and release their tiredness. In other words, their mind are not prepare for learning diverse subjects or increasing their knowledge.
In short, because of today's condition in all around the world, people watch TV programs for entertainments instead of increasing their knowledge. They could access diverse resources conveniently as well as they are more overwhelmed with their tasks and issues, and whenever they have free time, they prefer to watch TV for entertainment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
..., so they are busier in comparison with past time. After a busy day, they prefer to lie d...
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Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
...ess. In other words, their mind are not prepare for learning diverse subjects or increa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18950437318 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82748936117 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483965014577 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3684909178 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348555825284 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166364630257 0.076458572812 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.211868942054 0.0737576698707 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326017328659 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.270483917085 0.0645574589148 419% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.