Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different slides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping conclusions. After all, each and every question or topic requires a careful deliberation in that there are multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe that with the advent of internet games and social media children education is much easier, I strongly believe this opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, children now are more concerned about social media and online games, such as Dota than their education for the following reasons.
First and foremost, the majority of individuals would agree with the notion that social media and online games made it so difficult for the parents to control the childrens. The main reason behind this rationale, children's spend too much time in their cell phones chatting with their friends. In addition to this, they are careless about their education. In other words, parents can't force their children to study, if they don't want to. To illustrate more thoroughy, My brother Ahmad when was at school, he was playing games on a PC program called steam, so he was spending too much time playing online games with his friends. Furthermore, because of his actions, his grades degraded too much compared to his grades before. However, I talked to him and prevented him from playing too much, so he got good grades. All in all, we can't and shouldn't overlook the upsides of obstructing children from spending too much time playing games.
On top of this, in the past children took care of their study too much better than today. In the eyes of many people in present-day society, children can't concentrate on studying even they spend too much time reading their books. On the other hand, people in the past weren't having the technology that is available today in order to facilitate the study. they were more concerned about studying. A great example of this would be children today have projectors, printed books, even professional teacher but they are not getting good grades. However, in the past, the only thing that children could do in their free time is studying. In contrast, children these days are just playing online games and checking their social media accounts. Long story short, it's clear as day to me online games and cell phones can be detrimental.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay, we can come to a mutual agreement that children education is much more difficult with the presence of the cell phones, online games and Facebook for the following reasons and details mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, after all, in addition, in contrast, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95434782609 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48501273232 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4371298079 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.590909091 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354769004579 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947625249109 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569128005514 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198519664272 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630816195206 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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