Elementary and middle school students (aged 6-18) should be allowed to go to school four days a week and have three-day weekends, but they should stay at school 90 minutes longer than usual every day. Do you think this is a good idea?
Since the dawn of history humman beings have experienced an extraordinary journey. Hunter-gather creatuers have evolved into civilized_citizens due to education. Education plays a crucial rule in human beings life. nowadays there are new sort of concerns about middle schoold students routine education. Mnay people believe that it is more benefical to students go to school four days a week with extra 90 minutes classes. Others, stay on the other side of the continuum, are of the opinion that it is better for students to attend school with daily routine and with a dayoff. As far as I am concerned, Iam of the last group for following reasons.
To commence with, This sort of program can hinder students from getting used to every day working in their future. One of the most crucial part of education is preparing students for daily working in near future, It goes without saying that job markets call for people who can work daily with efficent manner. Daily school class can develop these type of habits since students are obgiled to attend school on regular basis which can be benefical for them when they are going to work as an employee.An example of mine can drive this notion home. Attending school daily and on regulkar basis, My father could easily get adopted to job market as an efficiet employee. Hadnot he attended school with regular basis or maybe class with 4 days week, he woulnot have became such efficient employee because he would have difficulty getting adopted to 9-5 type of works.
Another important reasons to bear in mind is that extra 90 minutes classes can be boring, decreasing the efficiency of education. It goes without saying that students have limited capcity to attend classes with energy and enthusiasm. When classes are holds 90 minutes longer, students will feel bored and donot absorb what is taught in school. The longer classes are going to be hold in one day, the less passion students have for learning. As an tangble example, my little brother had lost his interest in school because of its longer duration.
Having considered all explanation and examples I deeply belive that it is not benefical for students to attend 4 days a weak class. Not only can it give rise to difficulty in getting adopt to their futur job, but also increase tedious of classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89312977099 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51105462077 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554707379135 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7581373465 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.210526316 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94736842105 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25783516477 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846868805829 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07036881345 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164525310494 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055707802079 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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