Essay about Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Work is the most important part of our lives. Work is a great teacher and builds the character. Work is omnipresent in our daily life. The efficiency of a society is measured by the degree and the quality of its work for the young generation the work is embodied in the form of studies and the older ones they have proper professional jobs in companies, factories, schools,..etc.
That said, workers perform different tasks during the workday, but others have the same similar tasks day in, day out. In my view, employees who do various tasks during the workday can have more satisfaction in their lives than their peers who only exercise the same tasks over and over again for two crucial reasons.
In the first place, when people workers the same work every day and every time, they feeling not happiness, weariness and not able to do anything else and also they hate they jobs, furthermore, they can't improve from themselves, like, soft skills and communication skills. the result that the company can't benefit from this employees to improve the organizational Structure to enter in a Competition with other companies to gain a part of a market. on another hand, the same workers will impact to the health status to the people, For example, my father who worked before in a steel company for ten years as a lifter, he was responsible for the transportation of steel from one unit to another (the production unit to the stock unit). After three years of exercising the same task, he started to feel the impact in his life, he has a significant problem with the concentration during his work and also he expressed signs of depression. My mother advised him to consult a physician and the conclusion of the doctor was that his routine job affected heavily his mental health. As you can see, having different tasks on a job can have a beneficial contributes to our health.
In the second reason, workers who do different tasks during the workday keep their level of eager and interest consistent. Workers with different tasks keep expanding and developing their skills more than another people. For instance, I'm a tax accountant in a big 4 offices in worldwide, in my company my manager gives me a lot of tasks to do that, although I'm still fresh graduate from my college, and when I asked my boss, why are you give me all of this tasks? he answered me, to gain many skills to improve my expertness in my field. so I'm not just advisory to my client for the tax law, but I'm working as an accountant to help other colleagues to finalize they work. and I'm always trying to develop myself by acquiring more knowledge in different fields.
In conclusion, I truly believe the mixture of having different tasks give the workers some colors in their lives. Not only because it would help avoid the monotonous and dreary life by also it would keep us avid by a constant self-development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...great teacher and builds the character. Work is omnipresent in our daily life. The e...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...al jobs in companies, factories, schools,..etc. That said, workers perform differ...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
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...l jobs in companies, factories, schools,..etc. That said, workers perform differe...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'job'
Suggestion: job
...o anything else and also they hate they jobs, furthermore, they cant improve from th...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... they hate they jobs, furthermore, they cant improve from themselves, like, soft ski...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
..., soft skills and communication skills. the result that the company cant benefit fr...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ion skills. the result that the company cant benefit from this employees to improve ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...sult that the company cant benefit from this employees to improve the organizational...
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Suggestion: On
...r companies to gain a part of a market. on another hand, the same workers will imp...
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...aving different tasks on a job can have a beneficial contributes to our health. In the se...
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...more than another people. For instance, Im a tax accountant in a big 4 offices in ...
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Suggestion:
...ountant in a big 4 offices in worldwide, in my company my manager gives me a lot ...
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Suggestion: I'm
... me a lot of tasks to do that, although Im still fresh graduate from my college, a...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ked my boss, why are you give me all of this tasks? he answered me, to gain many ski...
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...s to improve my expertness in my field. so Im not just advisory to my client for t...
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...isory to my client for the tax law, but Im working as an accountant to help other ...
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Suggestion: And
...other colleagues to finalize they work. and Im always trying to develop myself by a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...r colleagues to finalize they work. and Im always trying to develop myself by acqu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2380.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70355731225 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6794658521 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4338307594 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276175321165 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822130025772 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865225787508 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149714576143 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905016141891 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.