Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is undeniable that movies and television are one of the most important entertainment in the world which not only became a industry in the world, but also have experienced an significant growth. Although, some individuals claim that movies and television have serious drawbacks and negative effect on people life, It seems to me television and movies have positive impact on people life and our society for a couple of reasons described in the following.
To begin with, people free time can positively be riched by movies and TV, and they can have recreational activities for themselves which is very cost efficient rather than or entertainements such as going to travel. In fact, there is no doubt that people need recrational activities to after a stressful day boost their mood and refresh their mined. Thus, TV and movies provides them with an efficient way of entertainemant which is very favorable. For example, at the weekend I go to my brother house and see films and talk about them for hours which hopefully helps me to have pleasure time at the weekend.
Secondly, TV provides people with many educational aspects which aid people learn about various subjects such as wildlife or other cultures. Actually, people effectivly can enhance their kwnowledge in various fields of science which is very important for their personality growth. Furthermore, by TV and specially by cartons parents can teach their children fundemental subjects such as math or the way of living. The statistics in Iran clearly demonstrate that TV and movies are on the most important ways of education wich hopefully help families to educate children and even improve their cognitive abilities.
Admittedly, TV and movies can pose dire effects on society such as prevailing violence or encourage delinquency among tenager. Nevertheless, families can take care from their children to see appropriate films which is completely suitable for them. Moreover, the movies industries should take consider tenager and produce for them movies.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the positive effect of movies and television far outweigh the negative ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in fact, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24489795918 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85614012273 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8243025161 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184544364354 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706605304381 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682766789232 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126491717986 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686966842935 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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