Do you agree or disagree? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
It is undeniable that the rules which have been introduced are necessary for societies to have suitable conditions for living. In fact, some rules based on the current condition are introduced to efficiently improve the society for citizens' living. Therefore, although, some individuals claim that these rules which youth have to obey are very strict, I hold an opposite view and reject the statement for a couple of reasons described in the following.
To begin with, there are many rules to prevent youth form delinquency such as drug abuse, drink alcohol, drug trafficking or dangerous crimes such as abduction or murder. Thus, these rules effectively help families to up bring their children in a safe environment. Furthermore, other people who live in society with strict rules have safety and easily without any fear can live in this society. The statistic in Mexico clearly show that the families have suffered from criminal actions due to in this country there are not any efficient rules to deal with criminal behaviors.
Secondly, a plenty of rules are introduced in driving and officials impose heavy fine for drivers. Because, annually numerous people lose their lives due to bad driving habits such as drunk driving, violation of essential rules and etc. Hence, strict rules are essential to address such problems. A telling example is in Iran where there are various accidents daily and people ether lose their life or injure in accident due to the lack of enforcement laws.
Admittedly, some rules are to strict specially in education system or even in the driving such as imposing fine for even a little violation of speed. Nevertheless, these rules are an integrate parts of daily life to enhance the condition living in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09722222222 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61977728532 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7392172774 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162980519967 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642337929497 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322620875166 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996327377174 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142194597182 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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