Choosing an apporapriate career of job is one of the most problematic decisions that many people face when they are young. They know it's a very important decision and it affects their future strongly. Some people believe that it was easier in the past to identify an apporapriate carrier. Others disagree. In my view, it was easier in the past to choose the best job for two reasons.
First, today everything chages very rapidly as a result of fast technological advances. So you can't be sure that a job that is a good one, will remain a good job in the future. For example, when I was going to select my major for the university, I had plenty of choices because of my good grades. I liked computers and I was really interested in founding how they work and how different computer programs are written. But when I checked job market for computer engineering or information technology majors threre was a little job offers. So I decided not to attend these majors because of the fear that I may become an unemployed graduate in the future. I picked mechanical engineering as my major and it took seven years for me to grafuate with a M.Sc. degree. But when I entered the job market, the situation was very differet with seven years before. Surprisingly with the advances in computer programing usages, there were plenty of job offers for computer programming. The salaries for this jobs were far much higher than mechanical engineering jobs. As you cam see, it is much harder to choose the right career nowadays.
Second, there were less jobs available in the past, so people had less options to inquire and it was easier for every one to select the apporapriate job for him or herself. For example, when my father was going to choose his major there was about 20 different ones to pick from. But when I was going to attend university threre was abou 100 different majors. The more the options, the more time you need to check each and thus it will be harder to choose the best that fits your abilities and talents and leads to a successful future. That's why I believe it's become harder today to choose a career.
In sum, I think idntifying the apporapriate career is harder today compared with the past because nowadays everything changes much rapidly and there are much more careers to choose from. It is very important that people spend as much time as needed to be sure that their career is apporapriate for them and asures a successful future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, so, thus, for example, i think, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65287356322 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56967898756 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3240584928 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7727272727 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179389193234 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575995188708 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396769564967 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122827287271 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170129017578 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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