In my perspective, the Internet has a lot of benefits for human being such as providing people with massive amount of data and information. There are many online courses which help buzy city dwellers to educate. Moreover, you can access to community's you admire throught the net. Last but not least, once not only get the information he or she want, but also they can easily reachin formation no matter where are they.
First, thanks to the Internet, learning is no more difficult. Many universities offer online programs which is not required to regularly participate in class and they can also get degree at homes. Apart from busy folks, students who cannot afford a university, are able to persue their interest's. Besides, the internet enable them to learn when they prefer. There are no obligation to start classes at 8 AM!
Second of all, many communities are made in the Net to assist eachother. For example, I am a developer, and it is common to run into problems. Fortunetly, there a lot of web sites that many computer programmers join to gether and awnser the each other's questions. I enrolled the site ,and honestly, I could not deal with baffling difficulty. Pluse, many reforms group exist on the Internet which have a great influences like enviromental lovers.
Ultimetely, aside from abundent materials that the Internet provides, the utiliziation us also convinent. For instance imagine you ask your self where is the capital of iran? Tehran or Mashand? The hardest part of fiding the awnsers is unlocking your phone and open google web site. As you google your question, you will get the awnser. wherase, in the gloomy past day, you faced with many hardships to discover awnsers. For example, once was requred to refer library, and liberian find out which book would awnser your question! it is unbearable!
For all the reasons that I have stated, I believe internet furnish us with an astonishing way to access data. online courses play an essential role in modern societies and are going to educate more people. Moreover, communities on the net, once can contact with experts to silve his or her problem, and all of this contibution require no more effort than just a click.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... not only get the information he or she want, but also they can easily reachin forma...
^^^^
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'obligations'?
Suggestion: obligations
...to learn when they prefer. There are no obligation to start classes at 8 AM! Second of a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ch others questions. I enrolled the site ,and honestly, I could not deal with baff...
^^
Line 4, column 274, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...is unlocking your phone and open google web site. As you google your question, you will ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wherase
...your question, you will get the awnser. wherase, in the gloomy past day, you faced with...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 531, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... which book would awnser your question! it is unbearable! For all the reasons th...
^^
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Online
...with an astonishing way to access data. online courses play an essential role in moder...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, honestly, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8981233244 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6319459647 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619302949062 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1967233508 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0454545455 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.061914971895 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195134254203 0.076458572812 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290891892611 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0326644325562 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348339191273 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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