Essay topics: TPO45
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent years, the whole world has been changing astronomically at the speed of light with the advent of novel innovations and concepts. Hence, people have been forced to adapt their lifestyles and learn how to stand on their own. A controversial debate, though, which is often raised with respect to the ethos of this issue is whether these situations lead young people to be much more independent than they used to be. Ergo, when it comes to my stance, by weighing up the current conditions in comparison to the previous era, I firmly hold the idea that the young generation gained recognition in every society as a result of their great extent efforts which encourage them to have their rules and regulations to achieve their goals for three reasons which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the prime reason why I am of such a belief is that the lowest level of knowledge in the past vis-à-vis the highest level in today's world. As a matter of fact, these days the majority of the young generation have access to up-to-date information through a computer database_thanks to the miracle of the world wide web_which causes youth to be fully aware of the outcomes and side effects of their decisions. The social media network, Facebook as a case in point, lets people share their experience of doing everything.
By the same token, another paramount reason that must be cataloged here is that the right of having privacy and freedom for young people are considered by their parents when they want to make decisions for their futures, while previously these decisions were taken based on rigid social hierarchies. in other words, under those exhausting circumstances, young generations choices were restricted on social discriminatory taboos.
Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that getting involved for parents in determinations of their children's intentions was used to be epidemic and inevitable. Owing to that children spend their lifespans near their parents, thus, they did not have enough experience of being independent.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I definitely agree with the initial statement and as a liberal person believe that there is not a vestige of interference in youth purposes. To sum up, having discussed the rationales, I am of the opinion that being free in choices brings about a harbinger of far better times to come for the next generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, to sum up, with respect to, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03465346535 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86192032254 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591584158416 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6507123991 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.461538462 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0769230769 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 5.45110844103 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289259959709 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903937889741 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591216190579 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14394270146 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566811288333 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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