Essay topics: Essay topics: TPO-47 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
In recent years, the whole world has been changing astronomically at the speed of light with the advent of novel ideas and state-of-the-art technologies. Hence, some argue that it is important to know about events happening around the world, despite the fact that they can barely affect our daily life. When it comes to my stance, by weighing up the pros and cons, I incompletely hold that as people say "a butterfly's wings flap could set off a tornado" which is why people must not be indifferent about events throughout the earth for three reasons which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the prime reason why I am of such a belief is that following the news which affects our future would be acceptable even though it has no immediate impact on our current daily life. What I mean is that the news that does not influence us today is utilized by businessmen and statement to arrive at adopt decision, which means the news is intertwined with our future destiny. Chinese authorities, as a case in point have commissioned a 1000-member think tank to follow and subsequently analyze the mass media which cover the U.S daily news.
By the same token, another paramount reason that must be cataloged here is that as Saadi said "if one member is afflicted with pain, other members uneasy will remain if you have no sympathy for human pain, the name of human you cannot retain" which is why It is far from humanity to be carefree about other people's issues. As an illustration, when natural disasters like earthquakes and floods happen, people from throughout the plant Earth have to support who are injured. Hence, if we name ourselves human, we have moral obligations to take care of each other.
Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that get involved in being up-to-date about news would take us under considerable stress which would have harmful effects on people like high blood pressure and continuous headaches. Accordingly, for preventing themselves from being disease, it is a eligible way to follow just some news based on our study fields and specialists which are really sufficient for our needs and awareness.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I partially concur with the initial statement and as an open-minded person, I believe that getting news updates foster our lives by an enlightening and enriching different aspect of our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, if, really, so, i mean, in conclusion, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97044334975 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80858171209 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.06919394 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.166666667 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8333333333 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142380043725 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582374633568 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743828148563 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761668739136 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587817248661 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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