Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debate between whether a update from the world's event paramount or not even it does not matter daily life's of people. Nowadays, a myraid of things should be taken into consideration in order to examine a destructive and constructive facets of this issue. some holds the view that it is important to be aware of the world's event; however, some believe opposite. From my vantage points, I concur with the former one and aver that being aware about events happening around the world is beneficial for the people even if it is unlikely to affect their daily life.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that knowing all the ongoing event person becomes enlighted with the outer matter. people do not know that what will be useful them so it is better to aware about something as much as possible; and event knowledge may brings this attitude to the people. Let me tell you my personal example to relate this subject. once my friend was very eager to attend the seminar in the engineering, however, he was unkown where to go and what to do for the process. Luckily, I happened to learn about the fact; my knowledge in this help him to draw is anxiety away. On the other hands, my image become more prominient in his eyes as sagacious man. Thus, by knowing certain news may be useful for the other and for ourselves, we can upgrade our personality on other eyes.
Secondly, another reasons that deserves some words to say is that knowing different events helps to connect with others. In society, we may have to face the various people frequently with different field and background; since knowing different events may relate with these individual. As a result, people can maintain in social circle. Furthermore, it may facilitates to earn more friend quickly. At once, my brother, who is very eager to learn more ongoing events, makes the new friends immediately at the very strange marriage event. me including him invited with the party while, I lagged behind to fit in that social event, but he was ok with his knowledge in the occasion. In this way, he becomes more social creature which is surmount for human beings.
Lastly, although the aforementioned reasons are the first one which cross in the mind at first glance. but, it is not only reason available. In fact, there is an another reasons that must borne in mind. different events may useful in the person life. some event to give information about some infrastructure, some notify world problems, market condition,etc. these information may useful for the people.Earlier this year, I had to buy laptop and I were confident which one to choose. however, I see a lot of people who asks for the suggestion in the internet with this matter. but, I had managed to do that as I knew laptop's infrastructure by various online event about the laptop where they sought about its specification. In this way, some times this behavior may save our time to entangle in this minor issue.
To sum up, contemplating all the above reasons, one can soon realize about the plus point that person get after knowing different events possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The debate between whether a update from the worlds event paramount ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ebate between whether a update from the worlds event paramount or not even it does not...
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Suggestion: Some
... and constructive facets of this issue. some holds the view that it is important to ...
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Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...that it is important to be aware of the worlds event; however, some believe opposite. ...
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Suggestion: People
...ecomes enlighted with the outer matter. people do not know that what will be useful th...
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...ely at the very strange marriage event. me including him invited with the party wh...
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Suggestion: surmounted
...e becomes more social creature which is surmount for human beings. Lastly, althou...
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...ure which is surmount for human beings. Lastly, although the aforementioned reas...
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Suggestion: But
...hich cross in the mind at first glance. but, it is not only reason available. In fa...
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Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a reasons' or 'another reasons'.
Suggestion: a reasons; another reasons
...nly reason available. In fact, there is an another reasons that must borne in mind. different even...
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Suggestion: have borne; bear
..., there is an another reasons that must borne in mind. different events may useful in...
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Suggestion: Some
...t events may useful in the person life. some event to give information about some in...
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Suggestion: , etc
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
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...e information may useful for the people.Earlier this year, I had to buy laptop and I we...
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Suggestion: But
...stion in the internet with this matter. but, I had managed to do that as I knew lap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in fact, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2579.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 537.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80260707635 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59190718627 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506517690875 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6190404647 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1071428571 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1785714286 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205848554782 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547064163776 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543913242582 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117897963421 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522425177807 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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