The expression "Never, never give up" instills a feeling of optimism in our minds. It is only with a positive attitude, can a person achieve his/her goals in terms of health, relationship, or financial needs. I completely agree with this statement as I have a positive attitude towards life. There are several reasons to agree to this expression, some of which I have explained in the essay below.
A person with a "never give up" attitude will always stay determined even during hard phases of life. For he knows that if he wants to overcome hardships, he should give his best efforts consistently and fight till the end. Such a person will never fail in any of his/her aspirations, for instance, fighting against a life-threatening disease, maintaining good health, augmenting wealth, achieving promotion within the corporation, etc. Hence, to accomplish life goals, a person has to have a " Never, never give up" mindset. To further bolster my stand, I would quote an example from my personal life. I climbed Mt. Fuji, Japan's highest peak at 3766 meters during heavy snowfall without any specialized hiking gears. It was the never give up attitude that kept me going and energized me to overcome mental fear and physical pain endured during the hike.
Some people may think that a person should succumb to a challenging situation and instead take a stress-free path. They believe that problematic situations might lead to excessive mental pressure and may be detrimental to health. However, I completely disagree with this viewpoint for, I think that a person should never give in to situation but instead, should fight with his maximum capacity and if in future, he feels that the situation is out of control and impossible to achieve, then only he should leave and move on.
In the end, bearing the reasons mentioned above in mind, I strongly support the expression, "Never, never give up," as it plays a profound role in achieving personal and professional goals and also contributes to a healthy lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04705882353 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84078063252 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2745157797 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308255962718 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114006801346 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151772296313 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205570865674 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765010677652 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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