The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important
now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I personally believe that extended family have played important role in one's life and they are really important to make our life happy and prosperous. therefore extended family is more important in today's life than it was in past.
To begin with, extended family are important because we get valuable experiences from our family members in the extended family. It will help us to develop our personality. for example, when i was small i always go to my grandparents home which was located in the village. By living with them, I learned many valuable things like how to deal with the problems which we face in our lives, how to make good relationships with other family members, etc. after living eight years with them, i learned valuable experiences from my grandparents which i couldn't have gained if i wouldn't have gone there in early age
secondly, they take care and support us when we are depressed or stressed. we can alleviate our stress by explaining to them our problems. they also give us valuable suggestions which are very important to make decisions in our life. for instance, when I felt bored or stressed I usually go to my uncle's house to share my feelings and it makes me more free from stress. they also give me valuable suggestions how to get out of the stress.
Third, when we gather with our family then we express our feeling and share knowledge to others, and it helps to keep cl;ose relationship with our family members.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 253.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7233201581 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60067637939 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525691699605 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1292972118 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14091433176 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673165606485 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080701430665 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993550082344 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729615302377 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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