Man is mortal, this is the ultimate truth. Till though to live foreever is one of the prime desire of human being. Everyday people are inventng and discovering from the aspiration of longer life. And these efforts have taken human race towards a better quality of life with longer duration. I beleive todays improved medical sceience and more humble work culture has the has potentially improved our life expectancy, which I will explore in this essay.
First of all medical science has come a long way and become available to general people in many ways. Now a days people are more helth concious even participate scheduled medical check ups. For example our office provides us medical insurrance and yearly medical check up as part of the insurranc epolicy. From the last medical check up I have coem to know about my high cholestorel level. Without this I may wouldn not start healthy diet and regular work out, whcih actually I am in now. This has also a social effect as well. When I am working out, I am also sharing that with my friends. So a group of people are being informed about potential health risks and can take necessary steps ahead of any accident. Additionally whether you live in urban high street area or even in the remote rurual one, you have acces to somewhat medical facility even though in the form of mobile cominication. So this way one can take quick help on any medical situation. Unfortuantely this was not as such when my grand mother had a heart attack and she could not be transferred to the hospital quickly for lack of an ambulance. She could not survive. But today we can call ambullance even air ambulance with just a phone call. Genetic medication is opening up a new horizon in medical sceince. It is making personalized treatment possible. For example one of my teachers was unable to concieve. After consulting with multiple medical institution for last couple of years therey were frustrated. But last year a article about gene fixation helped them to regain their hope. Very recently they went to singapore and successfully concieved a baby.
Furthermore our work enviroment has changed immensely as well as our work culture. Every day labour intesive jobs are being replaced by machines. Though it has some other implications regarding job crisis but I beleive it is better to operate a crain to put the scrap metal in the boiler, rather doin it by hand. And this is a real life example from my uncle who is in his 60s and suffereing from lungs problems. Doctors identified small metal particles has been stuck in his lungs are causing infection. Today this kind of medical conditions are covered by the company but my uncle is spending his last savings on treatments. Today we enjoy more leaves than ealry days. We can take a break from the work to refresh our mind. Companies also beleive refreshed employee will gnereate better output. For example I have 25 days of yearly vacation which I utilize in a long trip to a foreign country. Last year I made it more thrilling by visiting Malaysia, Thailand and SIngapore in a trip. This way I get to kno new culture, new people and gather new hopes. And I am enjoying my work more now.
In conclution I beleive advanced science and technology and mnageable working condition has helped us living a longer life
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ailable to general people in many ways. Now a days people are more helth concious even par...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... necessary steps ahead of any accident. Additionally whether you live in urban high street a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s therey were frustrated. But last year a article about gene fixation helped them...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...e and successfully concieved a baby. Furthermore our work enviroment has changed immense...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to live' or 'live'.
Suggestion: to live; live
...ageable working condition has helped us living a longer life
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'kind of', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231511254019 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.176848874598 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110932475884 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0610932475884 0.046263068375 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0739549839228 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104501607717 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0530546623794 0.0351676179071 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55456450205 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0209003215434 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0064308681672 0.00188951952338 340% => OK
Determiners: 0.0739549839228 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0144694533762 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0096463022508 0.0139019557991 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3307.0 2387.08602151 139% => OK
No of words: 577.0 408.028673835 141% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73136915078 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90110439584 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331022530329 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246100519931 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155979202773 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0953206239168 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55456450205 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 312.0 212.727598566 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540727902946 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 68.8743092921 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6684587814 184% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 15.1842105263 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8447367481 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0263157895 120.699889404 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1842105263 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 39.7942625194 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.24742268041 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272460540449 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0686329500913 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0698887074158 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.308359316178 0.497263757937 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156437552143 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682918463565 0.114077575197 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548211720253 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278245464531 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0984672087523 0.067059652881 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188224634523 0.210909579961 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297954858586 0.0618886996521 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.91756272401 305% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 11.0 2.75985663082 399% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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