A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
There are many different types of children's development. One of them which I think is important is children's physical development. Children must be at least healthy to succeed in their future life, and this is just the lowest standard of development. To help the child with physical development, I would choose a ball as a gift.
First, one must run to play a soccer ball, and this allows the enhancement in motion skills. It's actually not an easy task to kick a ball. The abilities to track a ball and follow are necessary. The physical coordination and eyes and limbs will be improved by the process of following a ball. Also, the ability to control the ball is also a complicated skill. In order to master this, the child must be aware of, or at least familiar with the movement and positioning of legs. And the most important result is that the child often ends up repeating and practicing, which is beneficial for muscle strength and mental toughness.
Second, there are many people playing a soccer ball in my country. This helps the child to build connections with people of shared interest. For example, when talking to a stranger, it's better to start with easy topics. And soccer could be one of the good options. If the stranger has played any soccer, no matter master in it or not, they could talk a bit. And it is very unlikely that nobody tried this sport in my country.
Third, sports make a child happy. When playing sports, the human brain secreted dopamine, which is a substance that affects our emotion in a positive way. This helps the child fight against potential depression. With a happy child life, a faultless development of a child is expected.
To conclude, I would choose a soccer ball as a gift for a child. It provides physical development that is crucial for a child and other social advantages as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, second, so, third, well, at least, for example, i think, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73148148148 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63165024089 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533950617284 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5804374385 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.652173913 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23400520924 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755427582463 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816132103606 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147619873584 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536557839353 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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