good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities
There are both type of quality first is good quality and other is bad quality. Every good quality is the most important of every people in life. Human have so many qualities and all qualities is important to survive in this modern era, like knowledge, honest, good behavior and sense of humor and so on. I agree with the statement that “good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities", for the following reasons.
To begin with, people need so many quality to build relationship with other people. Sense of humor is best and important quality to build relationship with other. If people have this quality then they easily build relationship with other and also make good friendship to friend. If people have good sense of humor then they made good reputations in society. For an example, when i was lived in London that time I have so many friends and also they inspired on me because on in society i made good reputation with my good sense of humor quality.
Besides this, good sense of humor quality is important because of is it benefit of yourself and also benefit to other. If people have this quality then they guide to other person and also they solve any problem and any situations. For an instance, when my friends was loss in business that time i supported to him and I gave best solutions about loss. Sense of humor is help in any situation.
To sum up, due to the above mention reason good sense of humor is help to build relationship with other and make a good reputation in society, and sense of humor quality is also help in deal with problem and benefit for own self. Hence, I agree with the statement that "good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, so, then, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61812297735 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53708886145 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.381877022654 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.445219874 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.531733151271 0.236089414692 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24028733737 0.076458572812 314% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161571210823 0.0737576698707 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.399061595785 0.150856017488 265% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172713256094 0.0645574589148 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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