university that has high placement ratio

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university that has high placement ratio

In modern era education is one of the most important for the people. Same student prefer to choose the university that has vary famous and well know professor they thing that education are good but they don’t think about future. However, Student select university base on placement they think about future carrier. I prefer to choose the university that has high placement ration reason are as follow.

To begin with, university build carrier plan for the student. Student select university base on placement. If university provide a high ration of the placement then these university make a student carrier. The university is famous but they not provide a student placement they provide only education. It’s not good for a student carrier. For an example when I was choose university for my post-graduation degree that time I was choose university who provided a placement. Other hand my friend choose university base on famous then they find a job own and I got a job through university.

Furthermore, if university has high ration of placement then student got a job in good Company and high salary. University are provide number of company are there for a student placement like Multinational company and job through live and so on. Student future are secure. For an example, my brother study in DDU university .These University has high placement every year. He select a TCS multinational company that they provide a high salary.

Last but not least, student got a job before a graduations. University provided a placement than student no need a fine job after complete graduations .student got a job before they got a degree. If student got a job then no need to find company for a last the semester project. For an example, when I was in last semester that time I selected for a job through my university so that time I have a job before I got a degree while my friend not got a job before a degree because of his university not provide a placement.

To sum up, student carrier set through placement. Student get high salary before they got a degree and also they have facility to last do semester project. I prefer to choose the university that has high placement ratio.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: varied
...refer to choose the university that has vary famous and well know professor they thi...
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...ary famous and well know professor they thing that education are good but they don&ap...
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
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...at has high placement ration reason are as follow. To begin with, university build car...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt select university base on placement. If university provide a high ration of the...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this university' or 'these universities'?
Suggestion: this university; these universities
...ide a high ration of the placement then these university make a student carrier. The university ...
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...dent carrier. For an example when I was choose university for my post-graduation degre...
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...mple, my brother study in DDU university .These University has high placement ever...
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Message: Did you mean 'this University' or 'These universities'?
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...but not least, student got a job before a graduations. University provided a placement than s...
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...ed a fine job after complete graduations .student got a job before they got a degr...
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... carrier set through placement. Student get high salary before they got a degree an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.01324503311 339% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 376.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85904255319 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77027971411 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.353723404255 0.540411800872 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 419.366225166 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0604517715 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4347826087 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382489448016 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169259729745 0.0996497079465 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171285888162 0.0662205650399 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278987493388 0.162205337803 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10061816806 0.0443174109184 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.42419426049 77% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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