Should government spend more money on the basic needs or buying or developing the computer technology? This is one of the most contentious issue and people express disparate opinions. From my perspective, any government should purchase more money on computer technology inasmuch as the following reasons.
First, any computer technology expeditiously performs the works such that it corroborates to enhance the basic needs. We can use this technology to ameliorate our basic needs. For example, in my village, many people were worked to their lands to fulfill the basic needs, without the technology myriad of people must be involved and the crops were damage do to lack of the knowledge of weather phenomena. However, when we set up the computer technology to predict the weather, then our village overcome that conundrum .
Second, computer technology is an expensive technology, a simple man can not offered that technology due to the inadequency of money. For instance, the basic need such as food, entertainment are the cheapable source. People facily watch the movies for the entertainment, grow the food in their lands and so on. But, they can not spend the money to buy and learn the computer. It takes lot of moeny and time. Hence, government should spent more money on computer technology.
Third, people become cognizant by using the computer technology. By observing the information to the diverse culture and activities, they can develop the society. People mind can be malleable by using the computer technology. For instacne, when an uneducated society’s people observed the vedios about the social plan, social reform through internet, then the people certainly changes and they want to become the educated which is an essential for that society. Without computer technology, reformation of a society is an grueling effort.
In conclusion, any government should spend more money on computer technology because it works expeditiously, it is expensive and people easily become cognizant by using this technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'offer'
Suggestion: offer
...ensive technology, a simple man can not offered that technology due to the inadequency ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...technology, reformation of a society is an grueling effort. In conclusion, any ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, second, so, then, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.390625 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92565661349 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0290278473 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7894736842 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36582079076 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131937644359 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152150241598 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248981457052 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138190514351 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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