here are different factors of person’s personality which determines success in one’s lives. The characteristics like hard working, honesty, diligence, sense of humor and intelligence are some traits one should have to be successful.
Success is a state which everyone wants to achieve in life. There are different factors of person’s personality which determines success in one’s lives. The characteristics like hard working, honesty, diligence, sense of humor and intelligence are some traits one should have to be successful. In all these traits, intelligence can’t be ignored. In my opinion, intelligence can be a representative term of person’s qualities like sharpness in studies, alertness towards surrounding and good sense to identify opportunities, so I think the most important characteristic of successful person is intelligence. I feel this way due to several reasons which I’ll explain in the following essay.
First of all, 20th century is being an era of scientific revolutions and knowledge is key to success in this era. It is easy for an intelligent person to acquire knowledge in various fields. His sharp memory skills will give him an extra edge compared to others. For example, school and college are important steps in getting a good job or starting successful careers. The sharp students in class always get good ranks in schools or colleges. So it gives them good starting point towards successful future.
Secondly, as one proceeds in career, it is important to identify correct opportunity and thrive on it. As a skill set of intelligent person they are experts in finding opportunist or even creating opportunities for themselves. For example, in businesses, markets are always fluctuating and one should be kin on when and where to invest his money to get successful deals. At this points, intelligence can be important trait which help person make right decisions at right times and situations.
In conclusion, we are in competitive world and it is important for every individual to be intelligent to be aware of changing surrounding with good knowledge sets and fetch a perfect opportunity. Due to all these reasons, I believe, Intelligence is very important characteristic for successful life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29153605016 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19499564473 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564263322884 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.434194994 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401696644686 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124556317738 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130163176791 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240334784357 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175381576732 0.0645574589148 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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