should universities spend more money for professors

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should universities spend more money for professors

Without a shadow of a doubt, The main goal of educational institutions is to graduate students who have practical and theocraticals skills. Some people believe that universities should only spend more money to improve educational facilities. While other people claim that entertainment facilities are as essential as academic one. Personally , I believe that the administrators of universities should pay the same attention for non academic facilities that they pay for academic for two important reasons.
The first reason worth mentioning is the best way to exploit the free time for students is to produce available facilities in their universities. There for such as activities could reduce the pressure that student suffer from because of studying and doing a lot of tasks and projects. For example , when i was at university I felt that I need to release anxiety especially before exams, therefore I used to play basketball in the sport center in mu university. This experience taught me that availability of facilities such as sport centers could effectively help students to maintain their mental health.
Another significant reason I would to mention that the financially status for students are not stable, they have to pay for tuition fees , books , accommodation and transportation which make them straggling financially, therefore they do not have enough money to do extra activates such as pay fees for monthly subscription for gym . For instance, I read a paper three weeks ago , which is studying the effect of existence of sport centers in universities and the financial status for students. The paper explains that students with these universities tend to save more money compered with students from other universities. Furthermore, paper shows that students physical health are better, in addition to that students use the saving money for other needs such as buying new staff for their accommodation or books.
This paper shows me that having such as facilities is mandatory not optional.
In conclusion, universities should spend money for non academic facilities and activities. Not only for helping students to maintain their mental health but also to help students financially.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3768115942 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06523844477 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3796875337 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321461628596 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122931101179 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12976798844 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183080088806 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119040729117 0.0645574589148 184% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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