Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the world cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statements? Use your examples to support.
Nowadays, whether hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup bring benefits to the host countries has attracted numerous controversies and has drawn the attention from the public. I my opinion, hosting sporting events can give plethora advantages to the host countries due to financial and social reason.
At the outset, there are myriad arguments in favor of my instances. The most predominant one stems from the facts that hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup increase the local sales and revenues. In order to get an authentic reflection, many people from various countries attend the major events and spend lot of money in hosting country. Thus there is a massive increase in sales and revenues. The most perceptible example I can quote here a football world cup was hosted in Russia and millions of spectators participated in this event who spend lavishly in accommodation and feeding.
Another pivotal aspect of the hosting sporting programs is helpful in increasing the employment rate. It is worth perceiving that there are more people require to manage the crowd which increase the demand of labor. The most impeccable example that could be provided here is Olympics which held in USA increase the employment rate.
To conclude, after taking above stated points into consideration, I can inclined to believe that hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and World Cup can give innumerable advantages to the host countries . Not only does the sporting events contribute revenues and employments but also it brings peace and friendship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 258.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1976744186 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73664837829 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.350569045 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373895388371 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134426102786 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112876878734 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242852862899 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102428326705 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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