Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Since the dawn of humanity, it has always been the most contradictions subject that being truthful is always a good thing or not. As we know, sticking with anything till the death comes is sometimes could be a cause of death, so it is valid for not being truthful always the most preferred to me. I feel this way for two reasons, which I am going to explore in the following essay.
To begin with, being truthful sometimes degraded our reputation. In this contemporary world, people love to use a mask of innocence. And, it is also true that if they show their true nature, the rest of the world will consider them immature and unsocial, which will have a significant impact on their reputation. my own experience is compelling with this. In my sophomore year of undergrad life, I lived in a flat with some of my friends. In my room, I shared it with one of my university mates. besides my room, there were also an extra two rooms where my four other friends lived. during one of the university vacation, one of my friends came from my village had to stay. so I give him the key to my room. during his time, he took some coins found inside of a bottle, putting on my friend table as it was badly needed. so after returning from, he shared this with me, and I advised him not to tell my friend instead fill the coins after collecting as early as possible. but due to possessing a quality being honest, he said the whole event to him and gave him the cash instead of the coins. after hearing this, my friend did not react so much. he took it very casually and said to my village friend not to be worried about this. but the thing did not like to him, got clear when he told me to ask my friend that did he take any small pot of coins beside that. because this small pot was the pot, he used to pray with it. so finally we got a lesson that it would be wiser if we kept this within us rather than said.
On top of that, sometimes there is a chance to make anybody's life in danger just being truthful always. being as a member of the Hindu religion, I heard a story regarding this. In that story, a man used to live a very honest life. And he was very strict with that. one day a man came to him because of some bad people ran after him as he had some gold coins. so the man sought to help him hiding in his house. but when those wicked people came to him and asked about that man. he was getting in a dilemma and got silent. The people found and killed the man after looting his gold coins. so just because of his silence or maintaining honesty, a man had to give up his life.
due to aforementioned ground, I tend to believe that living a meaningful life by hiding truth is more worthy than being honest always because it helps us to make and maintain our prestige and fame and because sometimes it helps to save one's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, regarding, so, i feel, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19449541284 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23803122686 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475229357798 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3896091562 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7419354839 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5806451613 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.74193548387 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0764941377139 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256451044547 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341337503533 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525611501237 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162923481179 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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