How government should spent money
The question of how governments should spend their money has been debated for many years. I strongly believe that governments should spend their money on facilities like playgrounds, public swimming pool instead of art and music museums.I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, people spend more time on working, so after working their really need to embark on places such as public swimming pools for maintaining their health. If governments invest their money on facilities like playgrounds or public swimming pools, people don’t need to go to hospitals, and governments can save a lot of money since people are in good health. I consider all of these to be things that we should deeply concerned about.
Secondly, of course there are some who thinking that paying taxes are not so useful because governments don’t build some places for people’s entertainment like playgrounds or public swimming pools, and think there taxes are being wasted.I think this is a miss-guiding idea. When governments spend money on facilities like playgrounds or public swimming pools, people know that their taxes spend for their well fare, and they are being delighted by their governments.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that governments should spend their money on facilities like playgrounds and public swimming pools for people’s health and their well fare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 229.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19213973799 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69699357375 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519650655022 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2335700004 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.625 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.875 5.45110844103 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224294978078 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137998625777 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108083951968 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17697787242 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792284781362 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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