Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
The question of whether it is necessary for political leaders to withhold information from the public or release the information for people to inform them has been debated for many years. I subscribe to the idea that, nowadays, it is really vital for all of the humankind to be fully informed by political leaders, but it is not critical for people to know everything.
To begin with, of course, there are some who argue that it is not essential for political leaders to tell people any news, since people will become flabbergasted when they hear a lot of news such as political news, art news, and so on. I think, this is a misleading idea. As individuals informed by their political leaders, they trust them; consequently, their leaders can easily conduct their duties without having a lot of problems which can made by their people like protesting in street. For example, in Hong Kong, protesters were protesting in street, since they didn’t know about their countries’ relationship whit China as their leaders didn’t informed them; hence, it made a lot of troubles for political leaders whereas in countries such as United States or United kingdom, the relation between society and political leaders is constructive, because their political leaders release every news; as a result of that, public don’t feel that their leaders conceal something; thus they won’t rebel.
Furthermore, when humanities hear news, they can plan better for future; as a result of planning for future, their stress will mitigate. When political individuals withhold bad information from public such as spreading a new disease or initiating a new war, individuals who are living in that society and don’t know anything about a catastrophic events which is occurring can’t plan well, moreover they can’t have prompt action; thus they suffer a lot of stress. I think Covid-19 pandemic is a compelling example for illuminating my idea. When the Coronavirus disease was first discover in China, their presents’ policy was just showing that this illness was’t dangerous, and also didn’t tell other countries or their people about this novel illness which is really fatal. The World Health Organization (WHO) couldn’t adopt a further action such as hampering travel to china, or making some restrictions, or even conducting some research about this illness; consequently, both chines people and other people living all around the world couldn’t plan for this new disease, and suffering a lot of stress.
Finally, it is not critical for people to know some ridiculous information such as who marid with Prince William. Sometimes political leaders want to show that they are really honest and tell their people everything. I adhere to the idea that, when public know some news which does not have any effect on their life, they just become staggered, since they don’t need these information. I think Prince William marriage is a compelling example. When Prince William wanted to marry , every news channels were broadcasting this event. People wanted to hear some good news about their life, but they didn’t; on the contrary, they only heard about Prince William marriage which didn’t have any effect in their life. Indeed I think people should not informed about issues which doesn’t have any effect in their life.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that public should be informed by their political leaders. This is because, they can trust more to their leaders, and also they can plan well for future and reduce their stress; however, They shouldn’t informed about some news which is not practical for them, and doesn’t have any effect in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 33.0505617978 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3072.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 598.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13712374582 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62705411407 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421404682274 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 907.2 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.10617977528 386% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.244867433 60.3974514979 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.6 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.85 5.21951772744 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259044002041 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101737646361 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980383499526 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200536097092 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112343503383 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.