Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that a person with communal sense always maintain the realistic view of life and choose the best appropriate routes that leading to its aim. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that people never shift their own favorte job because maybe it led to they losing dream forever. However, I to a great extent, agree with this idea that if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
First and foremost, a great chance would not happen for anyone several times. The professional people are who take advantage from every little odds in their life. Leaving a secure job with this hope that one more favorite job position would arise is not making sense. Anyone know real life is very far from an imaginary world. We not only should try to be more flexible toward world events but also picking up them and using them to following our main goals.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that selecting a secure job even if not completely satisfying will be a good chance for increasing advance skills and necessary abilities to prepare for a more satisfying job. Conversely, waiting at home and wasting time just fade brain and taking out any chance for success. If people read the biography of fascinating people, they realise that neither of them did start from a fantastic and perfect work-place. All of them worked so hard and experience failures a lot until became component enough to earn their dream.
Finally, yet importantly, take a vacation and waiting for a miracle make the person an unresponsible citizen and valueless for society. When people do not accept the responsibility of their own life, they force extra pressure on their family and other members of society. In addition, unemployment creates mental disorder and depression. The possibility of addiction and drug abusing is higher in unemployed people, so may they attended to criminal actions and losing a normal life.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that if people have the chance to get a secure job should take it rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Because it is the more realistic decision that can lead to success and is a good opportunity to obtain more skills and can preserve people from a lot of psychological and social problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...would arise is not making sense. Anyone know real life is very far from an imaginary...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...would arise is not making sense. Anyone know real life is very far from an imaginary...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85441527446 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59835161718 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556085918854 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6268545935 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.537460950744 0.236089414692 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14344783433 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195073854996 0.0737576698707 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297796379277 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140845366408 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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