If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
If I could ask one famous person a question, I would ask the person: How have you made to have success in life?
First, I would hear the person's examples and I would chase them. Those might also serve for me to accomplish my goals. For example, Bill Gates did not divise computers instead, he only foresaw that computers would definitely change the world around us. Therefore, I would get at his ideas and try to foresight new technologies.
Second, I would be able to overcome my life hindrances. For instance, Bill Gates had many drawbacks with his competitors. He needed to have the best computer to be sold. Also, he had to ditch plagiorism. Thus, learning from his problems would provide me a great background for my life.
Furthermore, I could make the right choice in chosing a career. As an example, I started studying Civil Engineering, however in the final grade I realized that I had made the wrong choice. I had to get back to the first grade to start studying Electrical Engineering. Therefore, the person's advises would help me in career choice.
Finally, being able to ask a question to a famous person would be very helpful in my life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erson would be very helpful in my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67860648812 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4393067616 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4666666667 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205483019933 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658799071805 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10908875097 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153545773577 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146741932916 0.0645574589148 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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