When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?
asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
finding information about the problem using the Internet
taking a long time to think about the problem
Use specific details and examples in your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
In life we experience many problems and it is, sometimes pretty hard to overcome them. I personally think that the best way to get over a problem is by finding information about the problem using the internet, as I will talk over in the following essay.
First of all, the internet is a powerful tool. There one can find anything useful to help him/her with their duties. For instance, a few years ago I was in the university finishing my studies. The professor gave us a final exam which would engulf the entire semester. I did not have anybody to help me because my friends had already passed the exam except me. Thus, I started researching on internet about the exam and, thanks fully, I found many articles and magazines related to the object. I finally was able to pass the test and finish my graduation. Therefore, this example illustrates that the usage of the internet has contributed to my graduation.
Moreover, many juniors have to overcome barriers as soon as they start working. Because we are new at job, we should be able to get over them as fast as we can. For example, one of my employees had to overcome many drawbacks through internet. In his first year of work, he did not want to ask for help and decided to use the internet for everything. He used the work's encyclopedia, which helped him with the hindrances. Then, this another example shows how the internet corroborates with us.
Furthermore, last year I suffered from bones ailment and I did not have money to pay for the treatment. Then, by watching videos on youtube I could work out the bones properly and heal the wound. Therefore, the internet helped me to cure the disease.
Finally, nowadays the internet guides us to get over as many obstacles as we have. Since we know how to use it, we might be able to pass over difficult situations not merely in university, but also at work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'works'' or 'work's'?
Suggestion: works'; work's
...he internet for everything. He used the works encyclopedia, which helped him with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59281437126 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60809206405 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9135678804 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0476190476 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184954431012 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511664658059 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794919837804 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118079100139 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132170496678 0.0645574589148 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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