When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?
asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
finding information about the problem using the Internet
taking a long time to think about the problem
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
In life at some points people face difficulty and need to solve the issue. they take different approaches to solve their issues. In fact, it is important to do what is necessary to solve the problem. if I face a difficult problem in life, I usually find information over the internet. I feel this way for the following reasons.
To begin with, internet provides lots of information about anything. There are different social websites, informative blogs, and communities. these websites are very good and helpful source of information. For example, after my graduation it was very difficult for me to pass my toefl exam as I was not the english native speaker. I then, found a website named toefl resources. it has very informative stuff about the english language. I practice it a lot and finally got my good score. this would not have been possible without the internet. However, if I had only get the opinion from an experience person I would have never get those useful tips. this is because the paper pattern of the exam always get updated and their experience would not be useful. Therefore, I firmly approach the internet to solve my problems.
In addition, by using internet we can also get the updated and latest opinion from an expertise about the problem. Since the internet have different communities over social websites where people share their ability about different situation they had faced. these stuffs are very helpful for the people. For instance, when my cousin had started an e-commerce business, he finds burdensome to cope with the financing. So, he joined the community of E-commerce over social websites and got many beneficial words of advice from top class expertise. after some time, his business flourished very well. On the contrary, if he think long time he may had great loss for the business. As a result, internet is a miraculous thing to find a solution for any difficult problem.
In conclusion, I strongly approach the internet to find solution about the problem I face in life. this is because, internet has a vast source of information and an expertise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...hout the internet However if I had only get the opinion from an experience person I...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...an experience person I would have never get those useful tips this is because the p...
^^^
Line 3, column 741, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and their experience would not be useful Therefore I firmly approach the internet...
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...the internet to solve my problems In addition by using internet we can also get the u...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...urished very well On the contrary if he think long time he may had great loss for the...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79436619718 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56994979253 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481690140845 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 355.0 20.1344086022 1763% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1702.0 100.406767564 1695% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 355.0 20.6045352989 1723% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 175.0 5.45110844103 3210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360355854561 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.360355854561 0.076458572812 471% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249226218484 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057258252825 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 178.6 11.7677419355 1518% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -288.85 58.1214874552 -497% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 141.7 10.1575268817 1395% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.98 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.78 8.01818996416 297% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 10.002688172 580% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 144.0 10.0537634409 1432% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.247311828 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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