Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Knowledge is power and it can be gain either from reading a book or from a personal experience. Some probably disagree with the statement that knowledge obtained from personal experience is more valuable than the knowledge gain from books. However, I think otherwise. In the following paragraphs I intend to put my arguments to support my views.
First, the education we learn in books sometimes contradict with the knowledge we seek in real life. The books knowledge is limited in some way as the books get older so as the information or probably the author did not mention the true facts in it. For instance, when I had a chance to visit the Northern areas of Pakistan it was very different and amazing experience of my life. As we accustomed to learned in our history that the Northern territory of Pakistan has dispute because of which there are always danger of bombing and firing. However, it was nothing in real. The people there were very much welcoming and peaceful. They show us different cultural heritage of the areas which we never knew from the books. As a results, the knowledge I gain from that experince was unexpected as mentioned in the books about my country.
In addition, a lesson learned from personal expericnce stays forever in a person's memory. To be more specific, when human mind explore something good, unpleasnat or unusual by themsleves it will always leave marks in their memory. These memories are more valuable as they can never be learned from any type of books. To exemplify, I always had difficulty in memorising the brand name of different medicine. However, after I worked few years in the Pharmacy I now have learned alot of brand name of medicine. This would not have been possible without my working experience in the Pharmacy.
In conclusion, I personally believe that the knowledge we gain from the personal experience are more valuable than the education we gain from the books. This is because knowledge in the books are limited and because, knowledge we gain from personal experience stays long term in our memory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'books'' or 'book's'?
Suggestion: books'; book's
...the knowledge we seek in real life. The books knowledge is limited in some way as the...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
... which we never knew from the books. As a results, the knowledge I gain from that experin...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... personal expericnce stays forever in a persons memory. To be more specific, when huma...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
... In conclusion, I personally believe that the knowledge we gain from the per...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...I personally believe that the knowledge we gain from the personal experience are...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88352272727 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65808152705 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3543504829 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.95 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37814283162 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114242220059 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136139682296 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276542499871 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148212115444 0.0645574589148 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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