Question The golden frog Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage

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Question: The golden frog. Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage

The golden frog is an amphibian that lives in and mountain streams in Panama and the specie is endangered because of a fungal infection. According to the passage, there are several possible solutions to prevent the frog specie from this infection. The speaker however stated that, none of the solution are very helpful and stated that the points mentioned in the passage are not convincing.

First, passage stated that frog disease could be prevented by introducing a type of bacterium in the frog's skin. The lecturer claimed that this bacterium did have positive effects but it would not stay last very long. This special bacterium attacks fungus only in the earlier phase of colonization when introduced into a frog's skin by releasing special chemical. After that this bacterium stop producing this chemical so, the frog would no longer be protected. Therefore, introducing the bacterial colony would not prevent the frogs against the infection.

In addition, according to the passage breeding the golden frog in captivity and then release into a wild would give rise to healthy population. Nonetheless, speaker stated that this might not help the frog to stay disease free. This is because there are other wild animals that carry same disease and when the frog come in contact with these animals, soon they would catch the disease.

Finally, passage mentioned that if the golden frogs population developed a natural defense, it would prevent them from fungal infection. The speaker on the other hand asserted that, this natural defense in which frog raises it internal temperature have drawbacks. The frogs when raises body temperature it uses plenty of energy. The expenditure of this energy weakens the frog and they are more prone to catch diseases. Hence, it is unlikely that this solution would prevent the golden frog from fungal disease.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a frog' or simply 'frogs'?
Suggestion: a frog; frogs
...se of colonization when introduced into a frogs skin by releasing special chemical. Aft...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'frogs'' or 'frog's'?
Suggestion: frogs'; frog's
...y, passage mentioned that if the golden frogs population developed a natural defense,...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y temperature it uses plenty of energy. The expenditure of this energy weakens the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17607973422 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50444577715 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0521562207 49.2860985944 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.375 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152121987652 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591165158335 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286452074656 0.0662205650399 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101064145938 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00752057102565 0.0443174109184 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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